Jun 27, 2015

What I Think About When I Think About a Statement of Inquiry


            At my first Summer Institute, we were told to come in the first day having written a first draft of a “position paper” – some thoughts on some position we had related to writing and/or the teaching of writing. At the time I didn’t know if I had a “position” on anything, but I could come up with a few things I wanted to learn to do better. One of them – and the one I chose to write about in my first position paper – focused on peer response groups. I used them in my classes, and I believed (in a theoretical way) in their value, but I’d never quite felt I was doing them very successfully, and so I decided I would devote at least some time during the Summer Institute to learning more about peer response groups and how I might make them work better in my own classes.

            I’m not sure why I came up with this particular idea; we were never told more than that single instruction to write “thoughts on some position.” And when I got together with my writing group that first Monday afternoon and we shared our position papers, the thing that stood out most to me was how differently each of us had interpreted the assignment. I had chosen a fairly specific aspect to focus on, while other teachers had taken a broader approach, presenting their values in regard to teaching writing, or talking about their own experiences and aspirations as writers themselves; one, a Physical Education teacher, phrased her position as a basic question: How can I use writing with my students?

            The title “position paper” has since been replaced by the title “statement of inquiry,” but one of the things that remains is the freedom each teacher has to shape this statement around whatever interests and matters most to that individual teacher. Perhaps it is some specific aspect or technique involved in teaching writing that you’d like to do more, or better. (In a later summer, my statement of inquiry focused on portfolios, which at the time I didn’t know enough about to feel comfortable introducing into my classes, but by the time the summer ended, I was so hooked I’ve never taught a writing class since that didn’t use some version of the portfolio system.) Perhaps it has to do with your sense of yourself as a writer or something you’d like to do that will help you as a writer. Or perhaps it’s a broader issue you want to consider and explore, maybe from a political point of view. At one point, thinking about the summer, I pondered making my “statement of inquiry” simply be: technology (though I realize this is neither a statement nor, I guess, an inquiry.) I feel that I am too far behind the times both in my ability to use technology for myself (I’d like to have a web page, for instance, and although I am on Facebook, I don’t know how to do anything on Facebook, not even how to find all my “new notifications”), and also in using technology in my classes. So even though “technology” isn’t particularly enlightening as the title of a statement of inquiry, I knew what I meant, and if I’d chosen to go in that direction, I would have been comfortable with the choice.

            What I have ended up choosing to explore for my statement of inquiry stirs some excitement in me, and for me at least, that’s important. Simply put, I feel as if I have caught the “political bug.” I am a creative writing teacher; I believe in the value of creative writing. (I probably believe in its value more than I believe in the value of Algebra or Chemistry, but then I do admit to being biased.) I believe students innately sense its value, and the vast majority of teachers understand it has great value too. And yet creative writing, like so many other arts, is constantly being reduced (or eliminated) by those who make the decisions about what teachers will teach and what students will learn.

            In one of our informal staff discussions over the last few weeks, Peter Anderson mentioned that in some ways, teaching creative writing can be seen as a subversive act. This thought shocked me at first, in part because I teach in a creative writing program – I would be considered subversive is I did not focus my classes around creative writing. But the more I thought about it, the truer it began to seem. Even in my program, one of the deans recently said that she believed supervising a creative writing thesis is much easier and less work than supervising a Government thesis, for instance, because a creative writing thesis has no content. I can’t begin to explain all the ways that statement is wrong.

            This summer, I’m going to search out all the errors in that notion. I’ve spent most of my life learning the “hows” of teaching writing; now I want to look into the “whys.” I know, at a level deeper than any conscious argument can tap, that creative writing is important. But I’ve never really thought about how I can make that case to others. This summer, I’m going to try.
                                                                                                                    Mark

Responding to Student Writing


A significant portion of my teaching involves my written responses to student writings. I find it’s one of the best ways for me to teach each student as an individual. What are some of the goals you have in responding to student writing? (In the interests of fairness, I must confess that I don’t grade individual pieces of writing, so I don’t need to include in my response some explanation of why I gave the writing a C instead of a B, for instance.)

                                                                                                  Mark

Writing when (and what) you don't have to write


We all have things we have to write – lesson plans, emails, grocery lists, and lots more. I’m curious about what you write when you don’t have to write something specific (or for a specific purpose). To me, this is sort of what “writing for self” might be all about: those things we choose to write when no other people or circumstances are forcing us to write anything at all. What do you write when you write for yourself? Or, perhaps you’re so busy you haven’t had much chance to do this kind of writing. If that’s the case, what might you want to write, if you did have the time?
                                                                                                                                  Mark